November 30, 2006

What I need

I do not care how you look with make-up.
I need to see the sweat
beading and dripping
salty and rainlike
off your arms
with every
step
you
run.

I do not care what clothes you wear.
I need to see the scars,
the marks, the divots
and tags that make
you a warrior
and show that
yes, you
have
lived.

I do not care how much money you make.
I need to know what you will
do when you have nothing
and noone and you
are lonely and
cold and
hungry
and
wet.

I do not care when you finish.
I need to know that you
bled, and screamed
and fought
mercilessly
the demons that
battled to
make you
DNF.

I do not care what kind of medals you won.
I need to know that you were there, and
you gave every ounce of your being
to the cause. And that,
that is what I need.
What I need
To know
I need
you.

13 Comments:

Blogger TriSaraTops said...

OMG. That is AMAZING. I LOVE it! Can I pass that on?

8:15 PM  
Blogger TriJack said...

thanks, and of course you can...
;)

8:37 PM  
Blogger Kylie said...

Yes, I love it as well. It's pretty great. I'm going to share it as well, since it sounds like you don't mind. Did you write that, or get it somewhere?

11:42 AM  
Blogger TriJack said...

thanks for the interest. heh, its all mine.

12:01 PM  
Blogger 13akbal said...

wow, very cool!

12:42 PM  
Blogger Riverbrady said...

Love the poetry and the styling. If you don't mind I'd like to pass it along as well :)

12:46 PM  
Blogger Bike Chick said...

That is awesome. I love it.

2:35 PM  
Blogger ironjenny said...

Very, very cool poem. Blogland has some really talented writers....
Jenny

2:45 PM  
Blogger Triteacher said...

I'm adding my voice - great poem. Backstory?

6:07 PM  
Blogger TriJack said...

yea, not much of a backstory... just a recent realization of what's important to me...

5:35 PM  
Blogger Donald said...

This is awesome. I just read your profile - you must be one busy dude. Good luck with the training.

11:18 PM  
Blogger stronger said...

Nice take on the Invitation :)

11:52 AM  
Blogger 21stCenturyMom said...

I'm a little late to the party but that was awesome! If only more men came in your model.

7:12 PM  

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